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It's a pretty involved test. Definitely has a lot going on. Extreme closeups on the muzzles of firearm seems too flat- it's too much of a cop-out, because it saves you from drawing the anatomy holding the gun. These things will come with practice.

...Also, are you okay?

PTRSHADOW responds:

why the last question?

The thumbnail is just some comic panel, seems unrelated to the animation. Even if it was, it's completely illegible.

The name of this submission tells us to check description. There's nothing there.

Nothing is happening, and the voices are really hard to hear. If the point of a pilot is to let people know what the show is going to be like, this seems like it would be a pretty boring show.

Why does he slide backwards?

rounindx responds:

Hello. This is the final boss fight in Sonic & Knuckles for Sega Megadrive (Genesis) in the second phase of the boss fight he slides to Master Emerald direction, front ou backwards, depending on how you defeated him in the first phase of the boss fight.

I dunno why it made me laugh so hard, but it did.

If you ever need a VO, I'd love to audition. Lets collab!

She moves great! Extremely expressive, and rendered in a great classic style. I like the range that you depicted in the reel, and it's inspiring!

If you ever need a voice talent, throw my hat into the ring- let's collab!

This is pretty good! Nice bounce and windup. Keep animating!

MateoXL responds:

Thanks!

Sound design was very mild, but Rusty would be proud. Great use of the shutters to really invoke that comic booky/manga feel. Keep going!

Kamanira responds:

Many thanks! This is actually my first time giving a shot at sound design, so it's totally fair if people find it pretty underwhelming. I'm happy with what I did for the boosters charging up, but everything before that was a bit phoned it. Had a hard time finding the right sounds for what I was aiming for.

Thanks for the feedback!

What's happening, and why is it a screen capture of a flash player, instead of just that animation's export?

themspaintfella responds:

Cause

The song is terrible, but the animation is extremely cute and good. Great job!

You said at the end that you were going to list the songs in the description.

Instead, you didn't link any of the songs in the description.

It needs voice actors. Also it would be a good idea to practice on background / environment art, because most of the time it's just a flat color, and sometimes that can lead to confusion in staging, where characters are in relation to each other, and such.

You got a great ear for setting the tone with music selections, but sometimes its really loud. But when it's literally between the music and the occasional sound effect, there's not a whole lot of opportunity to become practiced at audio balancing. Once you get voicework involved, I think you'll have a lot of fun with using audio balancing to help dictate the pace of your cartoons. Utilizing beats of silence to help punch up a gag or facilitate tension and other fun stuff.

The ambition is there, it's really evident. There's lots of fun moments that are super distinct in this that I liked, like when the cat gave that menacing grin before biting the dudes arm off. And you got the thing done! This didn't seem unfinished. But with that, there's also a lot of room to grow, so when you come back with the next installment, come back stronger! Do some research and practice on a fun one-off experimenting with new things that'll advance your understanding of animation, and boost your knowledge of the labor that goes into making funny and cool cartoons.

OffFriesAnimations responds:

First of all I just wanna thank you for commenting cause this show means a lot to me it’s like my passion project so thank you so much, and second I just wanna say that I uploaded this video on YouTube a while ago so when I reuploaded it here I forgot to put credits. But anyways I will do that now and thanks again.

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I've done animatics for Cyanide & Happiness, Purgatony, and WWE Storytime! I'm also a voice actor that's performed roles in One Piece, Gundam: Witch from Mercury, & Smite!
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Geoff Galneda @Galneda

Age 36, Male

Voice Actor/Animator

Collin College

Dallas, TX

Joined on 9/22/03

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