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[My first animation :D]

Seems unfinished, but what you have here is incredible for a first animation. It establishes a good understanding of character acting, you had complex SFX moments in here too, and I think you're off to a great start!

I would advise you start researching into your next step in advancing your skillsets. Acquiring an animation software that allows for more complex visual and audio capabilities. This is great for a start- now, go further!

AlfaFoxxo responds:

Спасибки!)

[Flossing Mishap]

You're an incredible master of your craft, and this was amazing to watch!

[Road To El Dorado - Scene 189]

This scene came out great! Tzekel lost some of the character acting in the ending fullshot, but the little reactions that Tulio and Chel were trading off were great! Also, really great backgrounds! I often struggle with background art, and yours fit your shots really well!

I was the voice actor for Tzekel Kan in this, and if you ever need a male vo for one of your originals, hit me up! I'd love to collab.

[The Road to Eldorado Reanimated Entry]

This came out great! Super dramatic angles, I love the mouth shapes you gave Tzekel Kan. The comedic timing on the hand slap was perfect.

If you ever need more voices for one of your projects, hit me up! I had a blast voicing Tzekel in this, and I'm certain we can make something cool together! Congrats on the Daily 1st!

Orbitten responds:

Thanks. I'll keep it in mind.

[El Dorado - Reanimated Collaboration - Scene 24]

Nice! You chose a really complex scene, and it came out great! I remember seeing your WIP's in the Discord chat.

Excited to see how the whole thing looks all at once!

[Yee]

I fucking love Primal, hell yeah.

[Vore]

Based on the style of your other submission, I don't think you made this.

[Mud vore]

Based on the style of your other submission, I don't think you made this.

[Rascal Rabbit & Benny the Bear]

Corey fucking knocked it outta the park with this voice acting.

Both of these character designs were extremely fun, and I was enamored with the attention to detail on their texturing- from the fur of the rabbit's arms, to the texture of the bear's tongue, and even subtle things like the veins in the bear's bulging eyes. The brain looked great, blood and sweat (and tears) carried the joke really well.

Only critique would be on comedic timing- some shots could've been tightened up a little quicker, but that's purely a creative choice. It's most evident, as it becomes clear that it's not the cookie he's interested in to get that wham, bam, boom, punchline payoff.

It's clear that this is a cartoon presented for kids, (after all, that's who Corey was talking to), the only thing that I think could've punched up the gag is if we got a reaction-shot to what the bunny was looking at. Be it a camera crew of critters / humans in awe at this spectacle of blood, or if it was shot in front of a live-studio audience. Even a misdirect, where the audience is full of bears and they applaud. Turns out this is what bears watch for entertainment!

But like you said, this dang thing took a month, I'm just adding weeks and weeks of work here- this thing is perfectly strong on its own legs. The team did a splendid job, and you all should be proud of that Daily 1st Award! I'll be keeping an eye out for this come Monthly Voting Time!

VoicesByCorey responds:

Thank you for all the kind words, and feedback, Geoff! Indigo has a bright future ahead of them!

[sunday]

I just shit myself in fear. Thanks!