Galneda's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[First Animation (Final)]

Pretty advanced for a first animation!

There are some V's drawn into the hair design that sporadically pop in and out of existence

Watch the backpack strap in the bottom right- it'll disappear and reappear, and it unintentionally jiggles with the motion.

There's a line along the neck/throat that disappers and reappears sporadically as well.

Other than that, keep consistency in mind and make sure your character is staying on-model. There's nothing wrong with exaggeration, squash and stretch, and overall flexibility, but be cautious when their proportions unintentionally warp. That'll come with practice!

Check out Richard Williams' "Animator's Survival Kit" its a book you can find as a free pdf online, and it contains a wealth of information about animation. Put into practice, your skills will advance.

[If my friend's mom was the boss in Doom.]

Why does it say that it's by Meatzoid when your name is SDXD339?

SDXD339 responds:

Because i don't have the money to change my nickname on newgrounds. But on my YouTube channel the nickname is meatzoid.

[Gta2 The Introducction Video]

You didn't make this.

BendyPro12 responds:

i know, but i din´t say: hey i made this, i put that the game was by rockstar, y never put the credits for me

[Germans in my house]

Rember.

Oh yes, I rember.

[Do you remember this?]

The only thing breaking it up from the still frame happens so fast that it's difficult to read what even happened.

I read the message. Take a break. Find your "why" again. I mean, the why you gravitated towards animation in the first place.

There's masterpieces you haven't seen yet. Study them, and dive into the making-of's, and get curious again.

Two things that helped me out a lot were live model sketching and reading Richard William's Animator's Survival Kit, which is a pdf you can find in its entirety for free if you search for it.

Don't play to the crowd- "Those who try to please everyone, please no one." You do the thing that you're really gassed up about, and the people that vibe with that will gravitate towards you.

My inbox is open, feel free to PM me at any time. I'd feel happy to help.

[Hazardous deal]

Why redraw the letters that have already been written? Just keyframe and add to the keyframe.

Siuuubrod responds:

Thank you for your advice I’m new to animating

[slash]

That's a really complex movement, and you pulled it off nicely. Well done! One of the more successful tests I've seen on the portal.

[Ihatemylifebet Lore: P]

Beep beep, it's a Jeep!

Love the animation on P

[Ihatemylifebet Lore: N]

Oh man, Nyan Cat's a throwback I didn't expect. What's gonna happen next!?

SuperGibaLogan responds:

no way its galneda

[Baby Soldiers]

This'd be right at home in a plot point of Xavier: Renegade Angel.

The plot is ridiculous and I loved the logic behind it. The animation was perfectly executed to drive the punchline home. If you guys ever need a voice actor, I would love to collab with yall!

CompunctionTime responds:

Lol, mannn, that is the 2nd time someone said Xavier: Renegade Angel. This whole time I was wondering what genre I was in. Having you as a voice actor would be fun, "it's just me btw". Collabs, I'm always down for those. (creating something out of our imaginations is what its all about imo).