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[Yoshi Stranding (Death Stranding parody)]

Hideo Kojima needs to watch this immediately.

[The Milkman]

Extremely cool special effect challenges snuck into this stop motion Lego movie. Like the slowmo glass drop tracking down with it as it fell, the shattering, and even the transformation sequence was really clever! Impressive work all around! The whole voice cast did an excellent job and the overall atmosphere was on point. You all deserve a cold glass of milk for the job well done on this!

[Girls Just Want to Have Fun [Animated]]

Considering the timeframe you had to make that, it looks fantastic. I can already feel the eyerolls you're getting from the ladies in your class, but its all in good harmless fun.

I love the fuzziness look of everything, the motion blurs seemed soft and fluffy. You made lots of cool opportunities to have fun with motion, and it demonstrates a really marketable, practical know-how with animation. You're not going to have a problem finding a job doing animation for a living, I think. Keep at it, keep exploring unexplored realms in your field, challenge yourself with more complex tasks, and you will absolutely succeed at this.

[You Lovely Lovers]

You are a master and a legend, and this is gobsmacking it's so fucking weird and great and awe inspiring. I want to meet you someday, I want to learn from you somehow, I want to see how you do this because the talent here is just mindblowing. It's so gross and so mystifying. You're on a whole new level, dude. Never ever stop because animation can't lose you.

[MF DOOM Raid Video]

This is great! I love the style!

[Alien Squatter | 不法占拠宇宙人 - Trailer]

The gameplay seems interesting, and the music is good, but the text between gameplay grinds the pace to a halt as it waits for the audience to read a wall of text. The text portion isn't very interesting to look at either, its not very dynamic. The game relies on reading, but the premise is kinda neat. Are there no cutscenes? No promotional artwork or concept art? No words from the creators themselves?

Put some animation into the text, help it match the rhythm of the great music you have here. Add transitions, and this trailer will do better because the game DOES look appealing. The music is fine. This can generate hype for the game if done correctly.

bagofdragonite responds:

Thanks for the advice. I think you're right about having the text be more dynamic in some way. It's on its way to release but that could be implemented as an update potentially.

The game doesn't have much for cutscenes, just cut-screens. We didn't want to give too much away so didn't show much of that in the trailer. I didn't do any concept/promo art as I drew everything off the top of my head. I might do some promo art when we get to the marketing of the game though.

You're right that it would be good to have some words from myself and partner. I haven't seen too many trailers on steam do that but the one's that did felt more engaging that's for sure. Since we have a fanbase from our earlier game it didn't come to mind.

I can't apologize for the text though. That's what our original game was famous for. I didn't have the proper time to put in to the art of Void Pyramid at the time but even though the game lacked on the graphics end of things the story, lore and comedy captured within the walls of the text is what built our initial fanbase. It wouldn't be right to break our fans expectations.

I'm glad you like the music too! I put a lot of time into making tracks that fit each area perfectly. The album can be listened to here: https://bagofdragonite.bandcamp.com/album/alien-squatter-ost-ost

I appreciate all this good advice and will see what I can do in later updates!

[Strikeout]

lmfao, it caught me off guard and I lol'd. 10 outta 10.

Portimations responds:

Thanks man! :)

[Bulbasaur (unfinished rough gif)]

I'ma vote to save it because there's some serious knowledge and skill demonstrated in this thing.

It IS hella rough, but it's a pretty good looking rough. Good use of smears, nice easing, you're doing everything right. The only thing that's not clear is what is this action supposed to be? Bulba goes through 3 emotional states, and two of them compliment each other.

Is srs when they get low >:(
Then coy off to the side with a paw up :D
Then elated when they're up on their hind-legs :D with a good swaying emotion.

What is it doing here? Try to watch out and make sure the action reads as you intend it. Great job, can't wait to see what you do next!

[Kana Eyecatch]

She's adorable and she moves splendidly, but I gotta admit, that thumbnail was barely comprehensible when I first saw it.

Which, I guess it did it's job because it made me go "what the hell is this supposed to be" and it made me click, but that might not work for everybody. If that matters at all, I dunno, but she looks and moves wonderfully. Great job!

[Talent Show]

I didn't like the homophobic slur. It was passable, the song was obnoxious and pitchy, but it was passable until the F-slur. It's completely unnecessary.