Galneda's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[THE LAMP]

This had potential to be so much more if you just pushed a little further. It was a really strong cold open, the guy peeking around the corner was interesting at first, but then it just kinda..looped.

Its as if you didn't know where to go with it or how to end it, so you just kinda...***phoned it in?****

Hah! Because the dialup.

It was frustrating a little bit, because the atmosphere was good, and those first two sequences look good, and that creepy droning going on in the background is doing all the work for you- because as its intensifying, seeming like its building up to something, everything cops out by throwing a filter around wallboy or stacking the lamp clicking hands over each other.

It felt like a doodle. "Whats this setting do? Oh. It flips my hand graphic horizontally. Whats this do? Oh, it stacks images of the lamp internally atop of each other."

Which is fine. I just want to see what you can do if you exerted more creative energies into things. You're doing things differently, and it looks interesting and cool.

Mission Accomplished! What's next?

SushiMaker3000 responds:

Thank you for your criticism. I made this as a joke for my friends. No real thought went into this.
I will put effort into the next thing I make for here.

Thank you again

[Noddy Hit And Run]

I am absolutely in love with the stylization of this. What softwares did you use in order to make it look so Playstation 1 era 3D rendering? I'd love to know your process, I see that you tagged it with Blender, but I want to learn as much as possible if you would be so kind. The atmosphere is foreboding and effective, and I think it's great. You did a wonderful job with this, as short as it was.

EtherealSnake responds:

Well I indeed used blender to make this animation, I tried to emulate the ps1 aesthetic by going with a low polygon count, a low render resolution (320x240) and low res texture with some dithering. I hope it answers some of your questions.

[Poyo - The undead bird]

DUUUUUDE!!!! This is extremely cool! I want to see more complex movements, I want to see more of the monster blending seemlessly in the environment! More creepy shit!

The actual final attack was a little underwhelming because we saw so little of it in-between the cameraman standing, and the cameraman knocked prone- but goddammit you had me on the edge of my seat. I loved this.

Dor-Bar responds:

What an awesome comment!
You should check the stop motion game we're working on, Tiny Money
The trailer is also uploaded here, I bet you'll love it.

[sonic battle with shadow]

Everythings too far away, not a lot happens and it's too short. We can't appreciate what little action is happening from this flat wide shot.

RBXImator responds:

well it was my first time making this what did you expect

[shape shiftier]

The frame-rate is painfully slow. I recommend sticking to 24 fps in your document settings, because the speed of this thing is trying your audience's patience. They'll get frustrated and they'll vote poorly if they feel like their time is being wasted.

montothesqueaks responds:

i know when i was edit thething it was acting slow cause of how old my pc is

[me blinking]

Onion Skins are your friend! Use onion skins in your animation software so you can change what needs to be changed the way it needs to be changed, at the rate they need to be changed, and to double check what needs to stay the same.

I commend you for hitting the ground running by tackling frame-by-frame animation. That's the way to go, and it's a style of animation that, if you can master it, that skill will translate across any software of the era. The software may change, but the fundamentals of animation that come from mastering frame-by-frame movement will not- you can only improve by learning new techniques. Smears, exaggerations, etc...

I bring this up because the OC's hair here, in the animation, is hella wobbly. To the degree that the shape of the OC's head completely changes once they go into full blink. Ask yourself critically, is it necessary for a character's hair to move this much just to blink? If you were going for dynamic hair movement, like it was caught in the wind or something, what could be different to better sell that effect to the audience watching this?

You're off to a great start! I highly recommend researching more about the process of animation if you want to get better at this. Be curious, be proactive, and hungry- seek & destroy, search for the knowledge you're missing that'll help you become stronger at this.

An excellent place to start was a book that helped me out through college, Richard William's "Animator's Survival Kit."

You can find a free .pdf of it if you google it, and that's a pill of knowledge that'll surely help you grow as an animator if you're serious about this.

I wish you luck! Keep practicing, and challenge yourself so you grow!

montothesqueaks responds:

Thank y for the criticism ill be sure to look up the book

[Sonic Vs Mario W/out Sounds]

Why doesn't this have sound?

It's a little suspicious that what's shown here has a stark leap in quality compared to some of the animations you've featured on your Youtube. Why does this one look so different, and have such a different pace and composition from everything else you've done? Why make this your first submission to Newgrounds?

LucasV12 responds:

hmm.. was my other animations really that bad

cuz i already know what is newgrounds
it dosen't have sound because when i put sound in
flash they become faster then the original sound
maybe you can give the fix if you know
SORRY FOR LATE REPLY :(
WAIT A SECOND DID YOU SUBSCRIBE OR NOT?

[Sinking a Soviet Sub]

Thrilling and engaging! Criminally underrated- this only got Daily 3rd? Are we out of our minds!? Excellent perfomance from the full voice cast, every shot was competently framed. It moves right along, with good pacing and a realized respect for real-world military operations, that summarizes and grounds the actions of these characters close to reality.

The models looked great, I loved the green lighting from the radar operators, and no particular detail really stood out as incorrect for me. This was like an achievable test pilot for a much broader concept, and I want to know what happens when you and your team get the budget / time to flesh out what a war between the Soviets and Kiwis would look like.

Chris Hurn knocked it out of the park with that score, the production value is either amazing or a it's just a stark quality whiplash after I've been drawing stick figures and watching kids figure out how Madness rigs move in flash all day.

...When's the continuation!? Daily 3rd...You can do WAY better than that!

lewisroscoe82 responds:

Wow thanks so much for the amazing kind words Phobotech! I'm blown away by your comments! :D
Yep full voice cast, some really good TV actors here in New Zealand getting onboard. And yes Chris' score has been fantastic!
I have 2 more promo scenes I've done which I'll be releasing on NG. The next one is the Australian point of view with Sydney harbour being attacked and the third will be the U.S. point of view. :)

[Cyberspace Pirates]

Greenlight this IP right the fuck now! I want more! I wanna see where this goes!

FunPix responds:

Thanks, I'm pushing to continue the story :)

[CYDONIA | teaser]

This isn't really a pilot, it's more of a teaser. Plus, you didn't provide any links or information for people to learn more about what this is. All you've said, as I write this, is "We're looking for fundings to make it"

...To make a movie? To make a short like Tales of Alethrion? To make a music video? To make a series? To make a game? You need to make this clear to your audience, and provide them with information that'll help you and your team's goals.

What's here looks splendid as it is, and it's enough to interest me. I think it'll be enough to get some people to dig a little further for information, but you need to help us out here and network your product.

Don't tell me, tell everyone. It should be right there in the Author's Comments, in between my review and the video itself.

MartinFelice responds:

It´s a pilot/teaser, because the production hasn´t begun, so yeah, tecnically it´s a teaser, but is playing the role of a pilot.
You can help with fundings here:
https://www.patreon.com/MartinFelice
But we´re currently looking for fundings on other places too.
And it´s a short, like any short animation that you can watch in an animation festival.
Thanks for your comment :D